Subjectively, I found the story to be riveting up until the part where Airl begins to convey information in English. Up until that point, the story was narrated by the human contactee Matilde as she experienced it, with telepathic impressions recorded in what I considered to be a credible manner. However from the point in the story of the extraterestrial Airl’s development of English fluency onward, the subjects and the qualities of the narrative continued to bear a definite flavor of humanity, which I considered to be suspicious. Not just the content itself, but also the linguistic skills and the modes of reasoning including limited appeals to logic seemed in my opinion to be entirely within the capabilities of a human with moderately-above-average intelligence, and with fair-to-strong a background in new-age subjects. In other words, I sensed that I could have written that material myself, and quite easily. This subjective impression on my part remains quite strong, and has completely overwhelmed any credibility that I had originally granted the earlier narrative. So I think it’s entirely fiction, or more precisely it’s the spiritual truth as understood by the author but communicated through a work of pure fiction. But thanks for publishing it. Perhaps it will help people better understand their natures as spiritual beings and become more responsible custodians of this planet.

Ruggy